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LinkedIn Message: Ollie CMO - Edge-to-Activation Service

Purpose: Warm LinkedIn outreach to Ollie’s CMO introducing Edge-to-Activation service
Context: Warm outreach (prior connection exists)
Service: Edge-to-Activation
Date: January 30, 2026

Message Draft

Hi [CMO Name],

[Warm context reference - e.g., “Great connecting at [Event]/[Context]”]

I noticed Ollie’s subscription model relies heavily on understanding which channels drive your recurring revenue. Many DTC subscription companies we work with are discovering that 15-30% of their customers are invisible to client-side tracking—meaning they’re making budget decisions with incomplete data.

We recently helped a $6.2M MRR e-commerce company recover attribution visibility for ~17% of their customer base and correct six-figure misallocations to marketing partners. They now have 95%+ reporting accuracy before browser tracking can fail.

For subscription businesses like Ollie, this means:

  • Lower CAC without increasing spend (by capturing existing conversions you’re missing)
  • More confident decisions when scaling campaigns
  • A single source of truth that aligns marketing, finance, and product

Would love 15 minutes to show how we approach attribution accuracy for subscription businesses. Available this week?

Best, [Your Name]

Message Notes

Word Count: ~140 words (within LinkedIn best practices for executives)

Key Elements Included:

  • ✅ Warm opening with context reference
  • ✅ Value hook: 15-30% invisible customers problem
  • ✅ Business impact: Revenue clarity, profit protection, time saved
  • ✅ Proof point: Eden case study ($6.2M MRR, 17% recovery, six-figure corrections)
  • ✅ Clear CTA: 15-minute call, low-friction ask

Personalization for Ollie:

  • References subscription-based model
  • Mentions DTC e-commerce context
  • Focuses on recurring revenue attribution challenges
  • Highlights CAC optimization (critical for subscription businesses)
  • Emphasizes cross-department alignment (marketing/finance/product)

Tone & Style:

  • Concise and ROI-driven (executive-appropriate)
  • Outcome-focused, not process-focused
  • No technical jargon
  • Strategic value emphasis

Alternative Versions

Version 2: More Direct (if very warm connection)

Hi [CMO Name],

[Warm context]

Quick question: Are you confident in your attribution data when making budget decisions?

We help subscription businesses like Ollie get 95%+ reporting accuracy by capturing customer signals before browser tracking fails. One $6.2M MRR client recovered attribution for 17% of their customers and corrected six-figure partner misallocations.

15 minutes to show you how? Available this week?

Best, [Your Name]

Version 3: Problem-First (if cold-ish warm)

Hi [CMO Name],

[Warm context]

Subscription businesses often discover 15-30% of their customers are invisible to client-side tracking—making it hard to know which channels actually drive recurring revenue.

We help DTC companies like Ollie get 95%+ attribution accuracy. One e-commerce client recovered visibility for 17% of their customer base and corrected six-figure marketing misallocations.

Would love to show you how we approach this for subscription models. 15 minutes this week?

Best, [Your Name]

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